NOVEL SIMPLE Chapter 147
Chapter 147
Gentlemen, there are three main changes in this revision:
One, the extraordinary event that Zheng Wenjun encountered for the first time.
1. The location has changed from the construction site next door to an abandoned factory building far away, and the monster has also changed from a silt monster to a Cthulhu-style worm monster.
2. Zheng Wenjun’s initial identity was also changed to a quality inspector. In other words, he was originally a civil servant in the system, which made it more reasonable to join the Abnormal Investigation Bureau.
3. In addition, the number of witnesses was reduced to reduce the scale of the incident.
4. The person who saved his life became his apprentice and his best brother in the past.
In general, I think this part has been strengthened emotionally, and it has also increased the explosive power of his inner emotions in the follow-up.
I feel that if the first time I watched the revised version, then in Chapter 134 “It’s Time! Zheng Wenjun”, the experience would be slightly higher.
Second, pull Li Rana into the plot.
Added a part of her emotional interaction with her family, enhancing the smoothness of her decision to join Aegis.
But the bad thing is that the agreed plot has been erased and replaced with medical treatment and direct invitation.
To be honest, this part of the revision is the most tangled part for me, because I think that in many places, it is not as good as the original version.
Third, the space floating corpse incident.
1. The Mi Army, which was destroyed on the way to the original collection, was changed to bring the wreckage into the scientific research base. As a result, the little lizards got out, causing the base to be destroyed.
2. A very small section of yellow cake (commonly known as uranium-uranium concentrate in the form of diuranate or uranium) has been added, in order to give 50 million yuan in the future.
3. For the arrangement of Kevin and others, two choices are given instead.
One is the same as the previous plot, showing particularity, and then joining the ninth district.
The other is to hold 50 million yuan as a “contribution of Zhengzhi” to increase power and influence, so that he can indirectly obtain information on the ninth district.
Based on Kevin’s past experience, of course he chose the latter.
Of course, I also made some detailed changes so that after he chooses this path, he can develop smoothly.
There are three main points here:
①The elder sister of District 9 Chief Edgar is no longer Kevin’s ex-wife, but instead, Kevin’s sister is the wife of the fifth person in District 9.
②Kevin’s best classmate is the son of the governor of Illinois
③ Kevin has been using a fake identity for the past few years in Assyria. After all, he used to be Ma Run of the Mi Army.
By the way, to add, the identities of Harry and Chelsea have also changed.
The former became a mixed-race Mi-Syrian. He grew up in the city of Halab in the Assyrian country and suffered discrimination since he was a child. Because of the war, he was taken in by Kevin. .