Tales of The Primordial Dawn

Chapter 7: First Catch



As dawn emerged from the veil of night, our small group of hunters, including myself, Liora, Eamon, and Joran, set off towards the forest's edge. Our mission was not the usual hunt, but an attempt at capture. We were aiming for a goat, one of the less intimidating creatures that roamed the wild expanse.

The forest's understory was a maze of ferns, mosses, and a network of roots that felt like ancient veins of the earth under our feet. Birds were stirring, their pre-dawn chorus sounding like an orchestra of flutes, bringing the surrounding wilderness to life. It was a melody that always filled me with a sense of belonging, a rhythm that was as much a part of me as my heartbeat.

We had devised a simple yet innovative trap. Using woven reeds and long branches, we'd constructed a sturdy cage, large enough to hold a goat but lightweight to carry. The entrance was rigged with a trigger and a tripwire that would cause the door to swing shut once the bait was disturbed.

The bait in question was a small assortment of our foraged fruits and vegetables and homegrown tomatoes, a tantalizing mix that we hoped would appeal to the unsuspecting goat. Eamon had suggested using the overripe ones for their stronger scent, a clever idea that had us nodding in agreement.

As we moved quietly, our senses were heightened. Eamon, our most experienced hunter, led the way. His movements were fluid, almost like a shadow dancing across the forest floor. His keen eyes scanned the surroundings, and soon enough, he gestured us to halt.

He had spotted a small herd of goats grazing leisurely in a clearing ahead. Eamon signaled for us to spread out, while he and I moved to set the trap on a narrow game trail we presumed the goats would use.

With our hearts pounding in anticipation, we set the bait and retreated, melting back into the surrounding foliage to watch. The waiting game had begun, our collective breaths held, as the symphony of the forest played on around us. We were no longer merely hunters, but pioneers navigating an uncharted territory.

 

Each passing moment was a testimony to patience as we lay concealed, the natural orchestra of the forest holding its breath, waiting in shared anticipation for the outcome of our endeavor. Our trap, a seemingly innocuous arrangement of ripe fruits and vegetables, sat bathed in dappled sunlight, their vivid colors winking invitingly against the dense greenery.

A soft rustling echoed from a thicket nearby, pulling our focus. The goats – a herd of them, hooves gently padding against the undergrowth, turning into the clearing. My pulse quickened, matched by Eamon’s steady gaze. The trap looked inviting, but would the goats find it equally enticing?

The leading goat, a creature of considerable health with a mottled coat, detached from the rest. It ambled towards the trap, sniffing at the air, curiosity evident in its gaze. My breath hitched as it neared the trap.

Its ears twitched, nose lifting high in the air. Something felt amiss. A gut-wrenching moment of uncertainty followed. Would it retreat, or would curiosity lure it forward? Our tribe's future was tied to this moment.

Then, driven by hunger or interest, the goat ventured forth, stretching its neck towards the blueberries. The tripwire snapped, the cage door swung in anticipation... but not quite quick enough.

With a startled bleat and a surprising nimbleness, the goat darted back, avoiding the cage just in the nick of time. The trap, our meticulously planned and eagerly awaited endeavor, had failed. A collective sigh rippled through us, the disappointment heavy in the air.

Our return to the village was met with sympathetic silence, our empty-handed entrance a stark contrast to the high hopes we had carried that morning. The animal pen, a testament to our labor and dreams, stood empty. However, it wasn’t defeat that filled our hearts, but determination.

As the sunset cast long shadows across our village, I could see the resolution in the eyes of our tribe. This was just a hurdle, not the end. We would try again, innovate, and adapt. Tomorrow would bring another chance, another step towards the progress we yearned for.

The dim light of the evening fire danced in the faces of my comrades as we sat around it, our minds a maelift of thoughts. The day’s unsuccessful hunt weighed heavily on us all, creating an unusual quiet.

“I guess our trap was not as foolproof as we thought,” Eamon finally broke the silence, a rueful smile playing on his lips. He was trying to lighten the atmosphere, and I was grateful for it.

“We were close though,” Joran chimed in, his youthful enthusiasm unquelled, “Did you see how that goat almost walked into it?”

“Yes, and how it escaped,” Liora replied with a soft laugh, her eyes bright in the firelight, “We need to figure out how to make that trap door close faster.”

“That’s a good point,” I agreed, my mind already churning with ideas, “Perhaps we could find a heavier object to act as a counterweight, making the door drop quicker?”

Mako, the strongest among us, rubbed his chin thoughtfully, “We can use some of those large stones by the riverbed. They’re heavy enough to act as a counterweight.”

“Sounds like a plan,” Eamon agreed, nodding appreciatively at Mako.

Zulu, my little brother, who had been listening quietly, finally spoke up, “Are we going to try again tomorrow?”

I turned to look at him, seeing the hope in his eyes. I felt a surge of affection for his unwavering belief in our success, “Yes, Zulu, we will try again tomorrow.”

“Good,” he said simply, his young face lit up with a grin, “I know we can do it.”

The night ended with laughter and tales of old hunts, the failure of the day was gradually replaced with the promise of a new day. It wasn’t just about the trap anymore, it was about our will to persevere, to innovate, to strive for a better future. The fire crackled brightly against the night, a beacon of our unyielding spirit. Tomorrow, we would rise again.

The first rays of dawn pierced through the leafy cover, bringing with it the chittering song of the waking forest. As the camp stirred to life, my mother Aisling found me by the fire, the remnants of the previous night's flame winking out.

"Off to another attempt?" she asked, her voice a soft morning melody. She always had this gentle touch to everything, a warmth that somehow made even the harshest winters bearable.

"Yes, we've made some modifications to the trap," I replied, cradling the cup of warm herbal brew she'd handed me. The comforting aroma of herbs wafted up, mingling with the fresh morning air. "We're using a heavier counterweight this time. Hopefully, it'll work."

Aisling’s gaze turned thoughtful as she stared at the now tepid ashes. “You know, Tak,” she began, her voice barely above a whisper, “your father...he was a lot like you. Persistent. Always looking for new ways to do things. He'd have been proud of you.”

There it was - the rare mention of my father. A silent, stoic warrior of a man, lost to us too soon. I could feel my heart swelling with a mixture of sadness and pride.

“I hope so, Aisling," I replied, my voice thick with emotion, "I hope so."

She smiled at me, her hand reaching out to caress my cheek, her eyes bright. “I believe in you, Tak. Our ancestors watch over you. And remember, even if today doesn’t go as planned, don’t lose heart. Each failure is but a stepping stone to success.”

Her words, sincere and filled with faith, filled me with a renewed sense of purpose. Yes, we had failed yesterday, but today was a new day, a new opportunity.

“Thank you, Aisling,” I said, pressing her hand in gratitude. “I won’t let you down.”

With that, I gathered my tools and joined my companions, their faces bright under the rising sun. We were ready to face the new day, come what may.

As the morning unfurled itself, unfettered by the hushed remnants of night, we set forth, our hearts thrumming with the rhythm of purpose. We moved through the greenery, the forest a kaleidoscope of life just awakening from slumber. The sun, ascendant in its celestial throne, painted the world in strokes of gold, making the dew-kissed leaves glisten like precious gems.

Amidst the ethereal melody of the forest, our footfalls were muted whispers on the velvety moss. Around us, nature hummed its symphony, a medley of rustling leaves, chirping birds, and the distant lull of the river, unifying into a serene harmony.

"We'll try the trap at the clearing this time," I told my companions. The clearing was an expansive space, bathed in sunlight, speckled with daisies and clover. The green blanket was interrupted by the occasional grey of rocks and the deep brown of the forest soil, lending the vista an earthy charm.

Our trap lay in wait, ingeniously concealed within the verdant carpet. With bait of our freshly foraged vegetables, the enticing aroma permeated the air, promising a feast to any creature that stumbled upon it.

From our hidden vantage point, we watched, anticipation intermingling with the tension, forming an intoxicating cocktail of emotions. With bated breath, we waited for our unsuspecting quarry, the hours slipping away as the sun traced its arc across the clear cerulean canvas.

Under the tranquil canopy of leaves, we whispered stories to each other, the words ebbing and flowing like the rhythm of our hearts, the tales as ancient as the stars, and yet, as fresh as the morning dew. In this serene communion with nature, with each other, we found ourselves observing a picture that words seldom capture.

As the day unfolded, with its myriad hues and symphonies, we continued our watch. As the forest breathed around us, its spirit intertwined with ours, I couldn't help but marvel at the beauty of it all. Undisturbed by human touch.

As the sun began to dip below the horizon, painting the sky with fiery streaks of orange, crimson, and violet, the day's labor began to seep into our bones. Fatigue wrapped around us like a comforting shroud, making every step heavier, every breath more labored.

"Well," started Odhran, breaking the quietude with his deep, resonant voice, "It seems our visitors are not in the mood for our hospitality today." His words dripped with gentle humor, his eyes sparkling with an unspoken challenge. The clearing remained quiet, the trap untouched.

I chuckled, stretching my aching muscles, "Perhaps our food does not suit their tastes." The atmosphere turned light with our banter, the disappointment of the day softening under the veil of camaraderie. 

As we dismantled the trap under the blanket of the approaching night, the air grew cooler, sending a shiver down my spine. The forest, once vibrant and teeming with life, now lay shrouded in silence, its inhabitants retreating into the shadows, surrendering to the encroaching darkness.

"We'll try again tomorrow," said Mako, determination seeping through his words, the promise of a new day bringing renewed hope.

Returning to the tribe, the embers of our shared hearth welcomed us, the dancing flames mirroring the resilience in our hearts. As we sat around the fire, the day's tale unfolded, our voices weaving the story into the tapestry of our shared history. Despite the fruitless endeavor, our spirits remained untarnished, for we knew, in this dance of survival, every step was a lesson, every fall a chance to rise again.

Under the canvas of the starlit sky, we found comfort in the fire's warmth.

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As the hazy fingers of morning light began to brush away the remnants of the night, the tribe was already bustling with activity. I noticed Elder Akara approaching, a thoughtful expression creasing his weathered features. I stood, respecting the gravity of his presence.

"Tak," he began, his voice carrying the weight of his years, "tell me, how is your progress?"

I could sense the undercurrent of doubt woven into his words, an unspoken apprehension that gnawed at the edges of my resolve.

"Elder, our efforts have yet to bear fruit," I confessed, keeping my tone steady, my gaze unwavering. "The goats avoided our trap yesterday."

The elder stroked his grizzled beard, his eyes contemplating the unseen horizon. His silence was like the calm before a storm, and it took all my resolve to not squirm under his scrutinous gaze.

"Maybe," he finally spoke, his voice an echo in the morning's tranquility, "now is not the time for this, Tak."

His words, laced with a soft yet firm rebuke, hit me harder than I had expected. My mind reeled, struggling to maintain its foothold in the face of his doubt.

"Elder Akara," I began, steadying my voice, "I understand your concern, but I firmly believe in this. We have learned much from our failures. And we will continue learning until we succeed."

His eyes, hardened by countless winters, met mine, the silence stretching between us, as if testing the strength of my resolve.

"Every endeavor has its time, Tak," he replied, his voice softer now, carrying a note of understanding. "Do not rush the river; it flows at its own pace."

As the elder walked away, leaving me with his wisdom, I stood rooted to the ground. His words echoed in my mind, reminding me of the inherent wisdom of nature. Maybe he was right. Maybe we were pushing against the flow, forcing a change that wasn't meant to happen just yet.

Yet, the flame of belief still flickered within me, refusing to be extinguished. The path ahead was unclear, riddled with uncertainty, yet I knew in my heart, we were onto something, a shift that could change our lives forever.

The morning stretched into a clear and warm afternoon, the sun hanging high in the azure expanse above us. It was just me, my siblings, and Liora venturing into the wilderness, the other tribe members either busy with their chores or out hunting.

"Is everyone ready?" I asked, hoisting my pack onto my shoulders. Zulu, his youthful energy bounding, gave me a quick nod, his eyes brimming with eagerness. Maeve, despite being young, wore a determined look, echoing Zulu's excitement. Liora, with her foraging basket on her arm, smiled gently at me, her quiet strength always a source of comfort.

"We're all set, Tak," Liora responded, her eyes shimmering with a subtle sense of adventure. She always had a way of turning everyday tasks into exciting quests, her optimism infectious.

We made our way into the forest, the rustling leaves whispering ancient secrets, the chirping of the birds offering a soothing rhythm to our journey. Each step took us deeper into the realm of the unknown, every footfall echoing the unspoken promise of discovery.

As we ventured further, we fell into an easy rhythm, the silence of the forest swallowing our words. Our focus was on the task at hand. We moved like a well-coordinated unit, each fulfilling a role, be it scouting, collecting, or keeping an eye out for any potential dangers.

Despite the inherent seriousness of our mission, we chatted away with ease. Our conversations were light, full of laughter, and playful banter.

As the afternoon waned into early evening, we found ourselves navigating the wild landscape with renewed energy. Despite the elders' doubts and the previous day's failure, we were resolved to see success come our way.

"Zulu, make sure to stay close," I gently reminded my brother, who had the habit of straying far when absorbed in the scenery.

"I know, Tak, I know," he retorted, a hint of mischief in his eyes, before he dashed off to examine a cluster of vibrant wildflowers.

"Can't keep him still, can you?" Liora chuckled lightly, her eyes following Zulu as he darted from one spot to another.

"I try," I laughed, "but it's like trying to stop the wind."

We continued on in comfortable silence for a while, until Maeve's voice broke through, carrying an uncharacteristic tone of worry. "Tak, what if we can't catch any goats again?" she asked, her eyes wide and earnest. "What if the elders are right?"

I looked at my younger sister, her usually carefree demeanor replaced with genuine concern. I crouched down beside her, placing a reassuring hand on her small shoulder.

"Sometimes," I started, "success doesn't come immediately. Sometimes, we have to try and fail many times before we find the right path. But remember, every failure brings us one step closer to success. And as long as we have each other, we can face anything that comes our way."

"And if the elders are right?" Maeve pushed further, a stubborn wrinkle on her forehead.

"If the elders are right, we'll admit it and learn from it. But for now, let's focus on doing our best. Can we do that?" I offered her a smile, which she mirrored after a moment.

"Okay, Tak. I believe you," she said, the hint of concern fading from her eyes.

I patted her shoulder reassuringly, rising back to my feet. Zulu had wandered back, and Liora was watching the exchange with a tender smile.

"Alright team, let's get back to work," I announced, and we pressed on.

 

We worked through the day, in sync with one another, each of us playing our parts diligently. Zulu and Maeve, the youngest of our group, were in charge of setting the trap. They had the energy and agility needed to sprint through the undergrowth and assemble the trapping mechanisms. Liora, with her knowledge of plants, selected the best vegetation to use as bait, and I was in charge of overseeing it all, making sure that everything was executed as planned.

As the day wore on, the forest hummed with life. Birds flitted from tree to tree, singing their endless songs, and small critters skittered around, adding to the chorus of sounds. The sunlight filtered through the canopy of leaves, casting an ethereal glow on the forest floor.

We made our first attempt at capturing a goat in the late afternoon. With bated breath, we watched as a young goat, its coat a dusty grey color, approached the cage. Lured in by the sweet-smelling vegetation, it walked right into our trap. However, the cage didn't close as it was supposed to. The mechanism failed, and the goat scampered away, its hooves drumming against the earth in a rhythmic retreat.

There was a moment of silence following the failed attempt. We looked at each other, disappointment weighing heavy in the air. But we didn't let it deter us. Instead, it ignited a fire within us. We fixed the faulty mechanism and reset the trap, patiently waiting for another opportunity.

As the sun began to set, painting the sky with hues of orange and pink, we gathered our things and decided to head back. Nothing else was drawn in by our newly placed bait, leaving us to return home empty-handed.

"Tomorrow is another day," I said, breaking the silence. "We'll try again."

The others nodded in agreement.

As we journeyed back to the tribe's settlement, the warmth of the setting sun on my face had me reflecting on the task. The forest, once filled with harmonious sounds, had faded into a gentle hum as dusk approached. My eyes scanned the horizon, a vibrant painting of reds and purples, and my thoughts started to circle back to the elder's words.

I was walking alongside my siblings, Liora trailing just a bit behind us. Their faces, usually animated with youthful enthusiasm, bore a look of quiet contemplation. They were probably reflecting on the day's events, just as I was.

The elder's skeptical voice echoed in my mind. "Maybe now is not the time for this," he had said. Those words had initially sparked a defensiveness within me, a determination to prove him wrong. But now, in the quiet of the evening, doubts started to creep in. Had we been too hasty in trying to adopt this new method? Had we overlooked something crucial?

I shook my head, trying to clear the encroaching doubts. Every change brought its own set of challenges, I reminded myself. I had to stay strong, not just for me, but for everyone who believed in this vision.

"Tak," Liora called, her voice breaking through my thoughts. She had caught up and was looking at me with concern. "You're quiet. Are you okay?"

I turned to look at her, her face half illuminated by the dwindling daylight. "Yes, just thinking," I replied, offering her a small, reassuring smile.

Change was always difficult, I realized. But it was not insurmountable. Our first failure was a lesson learned, and we would take it in stride. We just had to adapt to make sure we saw success the next time. After all, wasn't that the essence of survival? 

The forest quietude was punctuated by Maeve's innocent voice, her eyes glistening with anticipation, "Tak, tell us a story, please."

Her request stirred a warm smile on my face as I glanced over at her. "Alright, have I ever told you about the hugging tree?" I asked, catching their curious gazes.

"The hugging tree?" my little brother, Zulu echoed, his brows furrowing together in thought. "No, I don't think so."

"Well," I began, slowing my pace a bit as I gathered my thoughts, "Long ago, when the world was still new, and trees could speak, there was a tree unlike any other."

"Every tree in the forest stood tall and proud, reaching for the sky, but this one tree was different. It bent low to the ground, its branches stretched wide and welcoming. This tree loved to embrace all who came to it, wrapping them in its gentle branches. Hence, it became known as the hugging tree."

"Did it hug everyone?" Liora asked, her eyes wide with fascination.

"Absolutely," I replied, my voice dipped in soft nostalgia, "It welcomed every creature, big or small, with a loving hug. The hugging tree became a symbol of love and acceptance."

"But why did it hug?" Zulu interjected, his voice full of innocent curiosity.

I chuckled lightly at his question. "Well, the hugging tree believed that love and kindness were the greatest gifts it could offer. And in sharing these gifts, it hoped to create a world where all beings felt cherished and loved."

There was silence as my siblings absorbed the story, their faces a canvas of thoughtful contemplation. I hoped they understood the underpinning message of the tale, one that stressed the importance of compassion and kindness. Amidst our struggles, it was crucial to remember the power of love and how it could help even in the hardest of times.

Memories of a past where men and women lacked empathy towards one another came forward. It was a hard time to live as people stepped over one another for their own self-goals. Bringing others down just to have a faint feeling of happiness in their life. I hoped we would never become like that. 

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The following day the four of us went out again, this time even more determined to succeed. Success only partially lay with us, for we needed luck on our side. Our past failures still fresh in our mind caused us to understand that trying something new was not always easy. Even I with my knowledge was not all-knowing. I was learning, adapting, and evolving just like the rest of my tribe in the hope for a better tomorrow. 

As we ventured deeper into the woods, the forest hummed its melody, harmonizing with the chorus of creatures whispering secrets. The sun's rays were sifting through the foliage, casting a gentle warmth upon us as if echoing the sentiments of the hugging tree. The story had sparked an intimate, tranquil ambiance, with only the occasional rustle of leaves and distant birdcalls punctuating the serene silence.

"We should be like the hugging tree," Maeve eventually broke the silence, her voice imbued with newfound determination, "We should keep trying, no matter what, right Tak?"

Her words resonated within me, her youthful optimism a balm to my doubt-infested mind. I glanced at her, my heart swelling with a concoction of pride and affection. "Absolutely, Maeve," I replied, squeezing her hand gently, "We should always try our best, regardless of how many times we may stumble."

Our little procession carried on, with my siblings and Liora determinedly scouting the surroundings. The occasional smile or shared glance echoed the renewed determination we felt, spurred on by the story of the hugging tree. It reminded us that resilience was a defining trait of nature, and just as the hugging tree stood unyielding in its love and kindness, we too needed to persevere in our endeavor.

As we arrived at the sight of our previous unsuccessful attempt, I felt a pang of hope surge within me. The trap lay ahead, silent, still and inviting. The scent of fresh fruits and vegetables wafted through the air, a tantalizing allure for any creature.

Casting my lingering doubts aside, I set my resolve, turning to face my companions. "Alright," I declared, my voice firm, "Let's give this another try."

Their eyes shone back at me, brimming with determination, reflecting the spirit of the hugging tree, a testament to our enduring resolve. 

Under the morning sun's radiant glow, we crouched near the trap, our breath held as we awaited the imminent moment. The wind rustled through the trees, its whispers barely audible above the pounding of our hearts.

Suddenly, a rustle from the bushes seized our attention. The faint crunch of leaves under soft footfalls approached our trap, our hearts thrumming in our chests. Out from the greenery emerged a wild goat, its eyes curiously scanning the surroundings before landing on the fruits and vegetables laid out enticingly in the cage.

We watched, scarcely daring to breathe as the goat advanced cautiously towards the cage. Its nostrils flared, sniffing the air before stepping inside the cage. As if in slow motion, we watched the door of the cage fall shut, the unmistakable sound of success echoing in our ears.

A wave of exhilaration washed over us as we leapt to our feet, our shouts of triumph piercing the air. Maeve and Zulu were jumping around, their young faces painted with pure joy while Liora's radiant smile outshone the sun itself.

"We did it, Tak! We really did it!" Maeve cried out, her laughter mixing with the morning chorus of the birds.

"See, I told you we're lucky!" Zulu chimed in, his eyes sparkling with pride.

Liora simply stood there, her smile mirroring the relief and triumph washing over me. "It's because we didn't give up," she finally managed to say, her voice brimming with pride and excitement.

Their celebration echoed around me, a melodious symphony of success, reminding me once again why I had taken up this seemingly impossible task. I looked at the goat, now curiously munching on the vegetables in the cage, its unwitting participation in our grand scheme symbolizing the successful task in order to change us from hunter-gatherers into a society that grew its own food.

I couldn't help but think back to the elder's doubts, to my own wavering faith. But as I stood there, amidst the victorious laughter and the thriving life of the wilderness, I realized that we had done more than just trap a goat.

This was not just our success. It was a victory for our tribe. It was the birth of a new way, a new path, carved not just by our hands but by our hearts and minds.

With a smile stretching across my face, I joined in their laughter, the sound of our shared joy echoing through the forest, a song of triumph sung by the victorious underdogs. "Yes, we did it," I finally said, "together, we did it."


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