World of Alvarra: Rise of the Vampire Lord

Super Rough Drafts of chapter one of WaifuTamer!



choose which one of the super rough drafts is better! Please don't read if you don't want to get spoiled. I also want to prefix this with the fact I caught myself going back to third third-person view more than I liked when making the second chapter, so in the end it might end up third person anyway. I also want to add that when I post this on the twenty-first (21) it will have a prologue and two other chapters, chapters two and three. So if you don't like the beginning for whatever reason, sorry. I also added the updated waifumon dex, hope you're happy.

Chapter 1 Third person

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Chapter One - Mix of First and Third Person?

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WaifumonDex

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